It is kinda a religious song!!
I called it Reason but maybe you like something better!!
They say there is a reason,
They say that time will heal,
But neither time or reason,
Will change the way we feel.
We cannot bring the old days back,
When we were all together,
The family chain is broken now,
But memories live forever.
For no one knows the heartache,
That lies behind our smiles,
No one knows how many times,
We broken down and cried.
Gone from home that smiling face,
Those cheerful happy ways,
The heart that won so many friends,
In bygone happy days.
We want to tell you something,
So there won't be any doubt,
Your so wonderful to think of,
But so hard to be without.
I made this song up and I want to dedicate to my deceased uncle as he always told me I can do anything I want if I but my mind to it.
No one has every heard me sing this song except God and my little sister. I want opinions and I want them to be truthful!!
Thanks!! any reviews would be nice!
xx xxxWhat do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?I think it's really thoughtful of writing a song for your uncle. I think it's really beautiful. And since you've used all your heart to write it, I think that's all that matters and there's no need to change anything to it. Writing songs are very personal things, thats why I think you should keep it the way it is. :)
JasmineWhat do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?OMG!!!!! i love this song really its so beautiful. i can relate to this song wow is all i can say i love really really really beautifulWhat do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?very goodWhat do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?Wow, just wow! That's very nice!! I don't know what your singing voice is like but was picturing someone like Carrie Underwood or Leann Rimes/Leann Womack singing it.
Anyway, great song, Don't change a thing!!What do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?thats soo awesome !! :)What do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?Wow, that's really beautiful. :)What do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?*THUMBS UP* :DWhat do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?Wow, i wish that the songs i wrote were as good as yours. dedicating this song to your uncle was beautiful thing to do. do you play music to your song as well? i think your song is great.
please be carefull when you post your own songs on the internet. if you don't have a legal copyright, then anyone could steal your song and nobody would have proof that it was really your song.
your song is amazing. i hope you end up recording coz this song is Awesome.
-RubyWhat do you think of these song lyrics?? 10 points!!?i like the lyrics
but i'd suggest u to check out this song and im sure u'll luv it :)
My Mistake by M氓ns Zelmerl枚w.
the lyrics:
I think it's time for us to talk
Before you leave
Before you walk
Because in bed at night
You toss and you turn
When all that agony burns
Every move I made was just for me
Every song I sang was hollow
That was my mistake
I was a fool
Leaving our love behind
What we had I'll never find
I know I have made your heart break
And I realize it's my mistake
I can't believe we've come to this
We hardly touch, we hardly kiss
Don't run away
Cause I can ease your despair
You know I'll always be there
Every move I made was just for me
Every song I sang was hollow
That was my mistake
I was a fool
Leaving our love behind
What we had I'll never find
I know I have made your heart break
And I realize it's my mistake
I never really listened
I didn't, I know that, I didn't, no
I never tried to understand
I promise I'll change from now on
I'll try, I'll try
Cause every move I made was just for me
Every song I sang was hollow
That was my mistake
I was a fool
Leaving our love behind
What we had I'll never find
I know I have made your heart break
And I realize it's my mistake
Mistake
I'll make it right
Leaving our love behind
What we had I'll never find
I know I have made your heart break
And I realize it's my mistake
